Narrative Writing {Draft}

It was a dark and gloomy night when the surroundings of Paul was silent as if nobody was there he was walking on the way home passing a ray of house, bus stops and shops closed. it was all quiet.  He began starting to remember the sorrowful and painful days when his pet Rag caused trouble for him but sadly Rag and Luna [Rag’s wife] died While their son was born. His and her son grown in the wild without knowing his parent but what he remembered is to cause trouble and live up to be like his parents. Rag was the one who caused trouble first and Luna the mother of Raylan decided to join with Rag and cause trouble too.

In the next day At 5:00 pm in the afternoon it was a nice and warm day with houses open, streets full of people and shops that were open for sale. There were so many positive things to do. Paul wanted to go and take a walk in Wycola park in New Zealand but later on as he kept on walking he saw Raylan [Rag’s and Luna’s son] who grew up to be like his dad and mum. He was fierce, strong and smart. He learnt many tactics while surviving in the wild. Paul wanted to run but he has got no choice even if he runs away from Raylan he will track him again and again until nothing is in his way. So Paul was mind blanked, he did not know what to do but when he saw a knife near him he grabbed it and use it as a weapon to stab beast at the back.

After a couple minutes ago when the two opponents regain their energy and strength Raylan runs away to safety until he can use some sort of strategy to defeat Paul next time. Same goes to Paul he backed out and think of ways to stop Raylan. So the two opponents truced for now until the day when the two meets and battle again.  Paul was astonished that the son of his pets was alive but then he was also worried that he and Raylan might kill one another.

Characters:

Raylan : the son of Rag and Luna who grown to be like his dad and mum

Rag: the father of Raylan and husband of Luna he cause a lot of trouble back then.    Luna : The wife of Rag and mother of Raylan she got interested of Rag and begin to cause trouble with him.                                                                                                                        Paul :  The main protagonist keep on having the bad memories of his pet Rag and soon he met his son, Raylan, and have a bloody fight.

Events

Problem: Raylan is still out there with many strategies yet to learn to kill Paul once and for all. Raylan wants revenge he did not know that his dad and mum passed away and was not killed by Paul, In Fact Rag and Lag was the pet of Paul

Solution : Luckily Paul survived the fight and truced with the beast he went home with a mind full of ways to be safe.  When he meets him again he will be prepared and ready for a fight.