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Tuesday, May 2, 2017

Recount: Highlights and Low lights:

      My Recount of the Holidays

What? Going to a Bible meeting

When?On Friday night

Where? I don't know

Who?With my Friends family and close family friends

Why? Because We had to Baptise someone from our group




Bible Meeting

My Highlight on the weekends was going to a wonderful bible meeting on Friday night on a swimming pool with my friends family and having fantastic time with my close friend. When we reached to place I was so extremely confused about the place that we went because looks like a working place to me while my dad was purchasing a pass.

Then after that when my dad was finished buying a pass on the way to the entrance suddenly I look at door and stand there like a mannequin waiting for someone to open the door. Then when my dad came up to me he said wave your hands near to the door and suddenly my mind came up where there was those type of doors where you have to wave your hand to enter. After that huge embarrassing moment I had to close my eyes a little bit then I opened my eyes and it was fantastic I saw my friends splashing themselves on the pool, While I was done changing my cloths I slowly went back to where my friends and played with them on the water. After playing with my awesome friends at the pool but I had to quit early because I just couldn't handle the cold anymore even when I was at a warm spot I was still cold I felt like I was living on a Glacier with snow all over my body. After that huge freezing moment and got changed I was so surprised my friends were still not cold and I was like ''Bro are you guys like penguins because why aren't you cold yet'' and they replied to me they said" NO where not penguins it's just like feel so good because in Philippines it is a very hot country and the temperature is about 30 degrees hot or{ fewer than 30 degrees } to be continued and I am deeply sorry if I use to many I's and wrong punctuation


3 comments:

  1. Hey Daniel I really like your writing!
    Although there needs to have some improvements like adding more story and more explanation like what is actually happening.

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  2. Hi Daniel I enjoyed reading your writing.I did not know you could play on water,But apart from that you need to make your sentences make more sense.Greatjob Daniel

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    1. Could you explain in further detail what a bible meeting is

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