Narrative Writing {Draft}

It was a dark and gloomy night when the surroundings of Paul was silent as if nobody was there he was walking on the way home passing a ray of house, bus stops and shops closed. it was all quiet.  He began starting to remember the sorrowful and painful days when his pet Rag caused trouble for him but sadly Rag and Luna [Rag’s wife] died While their son was born. His and her son grown in the wild without knowing his parent but what he remembered is to cause trouble and live up to be like his parents. Rag was the one who caused trouble first and Luna the mother of Raylan decided to join with Rag and cause trouble too.

In the next day At 5:00 pm in the afternoon it was a nice and warm day with houses open, streets full of people and shops that were open for sale. There were so many positive things to do. Paul wanted to go and take a walk in Wycola park in New Zealand but later on as he kept on walking he saw Raylan [Rag’s and Luna’s son] who grew up to be like his dad and mum. He was fierce, strong and smart. He learnt many tactics while surviving in the wild. Paul wanted to run but he has got no choice even if he runs away from Raylan he will track him again and again until nothing is in his way. So Paul was mind blanked, he did not know what to do but when he saw a knife near him he grabbed it and use it as a weapon to stab beast at the back.

After a couple minutes ago when the two opponents regain their energy and strength Raylan runs away to safety until he can use some sort of strategy to defeat Paul next time. Same goes to Paul he backed out and think of ways to stop Raylan. So the two opponents truced for now until the day when the two meets and battle again.  Paul was astonished that the son of his pets was alive but then he was also worried that he and Raylan might kill one another.

Characters:

Raylan : the son of Rag and Luna who grown to be like his dad and mum

Rag: the father of Raylan and husband of Luna he cause a lot of trouble back then.    Luna : The wife of Rag and mother of Raylan she got interested of Rag and begin to cause trouble with him.                                                                                                                        Paul :  The main protagonist keep on having the bad memories of his pet Rag and soon he met his son, Raylan, and have a bloody fight.

Events

Problem: Raylan is still out there with many strategies yet to learn to kill Paul once and for all. Raylan wants revenge he did not know that his dad and mum passed away and was not killed by Paul, In Fact Rag and Lag was the pet of Paul

Solution : Luckily Paul survived the fight and truced with the beast he went home with a mind full of ways to be safe.  When he meets him again he will be prepared and ready for a fight.

Sustainability and Solution Part 2

Slide 4 : how many plastic are used in New Zealand

There are about 1 billion of shopping bags used in New Zealand. People often forgets to think about the environment and they just throw their trash everywhere. Starving animals eat plastic because they mistake it for food and so they die.  Some of our human waste goes into the ocean as well killing sea creatures. Just think about it you could lose or someone could lose their pets animals just because of the plastic we throw on land or sea.[although some people don’t know the current situation of the sea they just keep on throwing their trash.[Outcome]: People use plastic too much and they throw it everywhere e.g at the ocean or leaving them be and the land animals eat it and die same goes for the sea creatures.

Slide 5 : The pollution cycle

Though you may already know that billions of tons of plastic is made every year and are sent flying into the everywhere and pollute the oceans, do you know what happens to the animals that eats the plastic? Let’s start at the very start, first we consume food on our styrofoam/plastic packages and throw it onto the ground, gets into the oceans and beaches then some kind of storm gets the garbage to go everywhere, the fish eats the plastic and poisonous garbage then gets collected by the factory ships and then we consume the cooked poisoned fish in packages and throw the garbage and plastic onto the ground and let it move into the oceans then it all starts again.  

   

  

Film

What I have done so far are the followings
1.Doing the film with the group [it was fun even tho it was spooky a little bit] I had a fun day today
2. listening for our director [Ryan] for good ideas and intructions

My Next steps are the followings
1. Helping my group finish the film once and for all
2. Listen to Ryan for new notification about the video and help him edit it